Wednesday, April 23, 2014

Danielle -- notes on your houses....

Danielle,

I continue to like what you are doing here. I think there is a lot of room in this piece to let it expand and grow. I do like the inclusion of a definition of house and again, think that you have opened it up to really let you go explore. I want more of the houses, both literally and figuratively. I do hope you can share as it becomes a broader and deeper essay.

-AP

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